Bill,
There is plenty of good stuff here but there is still a little too much emphasis on ‘what you did’ rather than reflection on how successful your various approaches were.
You can also afford to be more detailed in your discussion of photoshop/premiere. Instead of just referring to ‘effects’ in a vague way, try to discuss the various effects you used and experimented with.
Also, be careful about stretching photos. I think you have done it a couple of times in the powerpoint.
Please make sure you use other approaches for other questions. Your powerpoint gives the impression that everything is going to be powerpoint.
Bill – I am still looking for a little more evaluation/analysis/reflection here. Also concerned that there is no sign of Qs 1, 2 or 3. Please post things up asap.
Bill,
There is plenty of good stuff here but there is still a little too much emphasis on ‘what you did’ rather than reflection on how successful your various approaches were.
You can also afford to be more detailed in your discussion of photoshop/premiere. Instead of just referring to ‘effects’ in a vague way, try to discuss the various effects you used and experimented with.
Also, be careful about stretching photos. I think you have done it a couple of times in the powerpoint.
Please make sure you use other approaches for other questions. Your powerpoint gives the impression that everything is going to be powerpoint.
By: AR on March 20, 2011
at 7:56 pm
Bill – I am still looking for a little more evaluation/analysis/reflection here. Also concerned that there is no sign of Qs 1, 2 or 3. Please post things up asap.
By: AR on April 2, 2011
at 2:03 pm